Feedback?

Mike Wright · 05-19-2007, 05:25 PM

This weekend I really wanted to tear into Dark Ascendance and get the final draft written. But I know Randy, the first guy I gave it too is at least half finished and has gramatical errors he's caught for me. So I move to my query letter, which I've all ready written but the best copy is sitting at work. And I can't help shaking the feeling that it could be better. But I don't know anyone experienced in that. Randy says it looks fantastic, but he's hardly objective.

But I thought I'd throw out and ask if anyone I sent copies to has tore into it at all yet. I'm thinking about re-reading it myself just to get back into that world... Help me finish my book two outline.

raindrops · 05-19-2007, 05:33 PM

I'm still working on it, been a bit slammed at the office (which is where I am right now).

05-19-2007, 05:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
Mike Wright Real Fantastic Bastard Crazed Patient of Psychosis Join Date: May 2005 Location: Idaho Age: 29 Posts: 348 My Mood:	Feedback? This weekend I really wanted to tear into Dark Ascendance and get the final draft written. But I know Randy, the first guy I gave it too is at least half finished and has gramatical errors he's caught for me. So I move to my query letter, which I've all ready written but the best copy is sitting at work. And I can't help shaking the feeling that it could be better. But I don't know anyone experienced in that. Randy says it looks fantastic, but he's hardly objective. But I thought I'd throw out and ask if anyone I sent copies to has tore into it at all yet. I'm thinking about re-reading it myself just to get back into that world... Help me finish my book two outline. __________________ I can't think of anything else to say. -=-=-=-=--=-=-

05-19-2007, 05:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
raindrops always falling somewhere Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: California Age: 43 Posts: 399 My Mood:	Re: Feedback? I'm still working on it, been a bit slammed at the office (which is where I am right now).

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