04-21-2006, 11:50 AM
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| Antisocial Noob  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Texas Age: 22
Posts: 18
My Mood:   | More poetry, this time a little off... I remember when I was at a time when every thing arround me was fantastic I remember this because that's when I learned the word it was my 681st word Or so I seem to recall I can see a time from now when I am grey where I turn my neck to look at the rainy day On the beach of mars dressed in black in the cantina called the MartianTrack I seem to remember a me full of pride and potential but without the praise it seems he was everything but influential his life carried him down the current with great haste faster and faster as he went only to stagnate in this place never will strong river relent snap!.. snap!.. snap!.. snap!.. snap!.. snap!.. snap!.. snap!.. down through the infinity of recolective revivification into the vibrating melow of dark existance never looking forward into the light but rather backward into our minds ever growing our fears feeding them as we go the more we hear the voices the more we are sure the entropic mist of the divine universe must flow through and dissolve all into the dark of the blackest bleakest night no light nothing but leeching dark and draining shadow to pull longingly at your soul help me it calls to the very stitches of your soul panick overtakes the grim realization that is soul downward now into the bubbling boiling inferno that is the spite that I have so carefully tamed with marshmellows and chocolate and affection you think that it is all night and no day? Even in my greatest hour is it bleak and even in my most deprived I am still rich! There is always a balance but not always knowing one I find it in my existance where it tells me how it all belongs that voice inside your head that says"mabey I'll do this:" and I listen listen well, I keep my imagination, and use it to do my sorting insanity is like a glove: it makes some uncomfortable, it doesn't fit everybody, but it's just fine by me Thanks everyone for responding to my last poem, I really appreciated it. |
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04-21-2006, 12:23 PM
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| Blow Pop of Doom  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
Posts: 2,367
My Mood:  | awesome i like this one also 
__________________ “If people bring so much courage to this world the world has to kill them to break them, so of course it kills them. The world breaks every one and afterward many are strong at the broken places. But those that will not break it kills. It kills the very good, and the very gentle, and the very brave impartially. If you are none of these you can be sure it will kill you too, but there will be no special hurry.” - Ernest Hemingway |
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04-24-2006, 10:03 AM
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| Blow Pop of Doom Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
Posts: 2,367
My Mood: | alright i'll go check it out
__________________ “If people bring so much courage to this world the world has to kill them to break them, so of course it kills them. The world breaks every one and afterward many are strong at the broken places. But those that will not break it kills. It kills the very good, and the very gentle, and the very brave impartially. If you are none of these you can be sure it will kill you too, but there will be no special hurry.” - Ernest Hemingway |
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Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? 
