04-20-2006, 01:26 PM
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| Antisocial Noob  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Texas Age: 22
Posts: 18
My Mood:   | A song: "Frozen Uplift [initials]" So So many So many ways for me to die So many ways for me to die Without ever knowing Without ever showing Where my loyalties lie All my life I was blind Wake up now to find Decay in my... TORTURED SOUL True love will keep me sane True love will keep me on the path But it doesn't matter anymore Can't bare to go on Pull the trigger hit the floor It won't matter when I'm gone And you'll all come Pay me lip service Deaf blind and dumb You never saw me for this This monster This beast that eats through me Unable to escape Unable to break free Unable to go Unable to run away WATCH ME HERE AS I DIE The light comes into my eyes A choice... A test Failing me My words My mind Is now dumb Look at what I have become A tortured soul A black rose In bondage sold In Pain Now Froze If anyone likes it, lemme know... poetry is my release and I've got alot of it, though some of it stranger than some of the other stuff but I love it addios |
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04-20-2006, 02:21 PM
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| Blow Pop of Doom  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
Posts: 2,367
My Mood:  | wow...i love it...yea i write poetry also for a release..
__________________ “If people bring so much courage to this world the world has to kill them to break them, so of course it kills them. The world breaks every one and afterward many are strong at the broken places. But those that will not break it kills. It kills the very good, and the very gentle, and the very brave impartially. If you are none of these you can be sure it will kill you too, but there will be no special hurry.” - Ernest Hemingway |
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04-20-2006, 10:10 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
Posts: 2,499
My Mood:    | Rock on. I might repost some of my stuff later. I'm not spectacular mind you, but I'm fair.
__________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2  Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced. |
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