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Old 02-16-2006, 08:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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started as a poem, still working on it

I want it to turn into a song now, i hear an old johnny cash type song

During the flight of a bird with no wings
comes a grown mans struggle to live as a king
over and over descisions we make
just to be sure we get into the take
all the days long i have hoped and i prayed
what wastefull efforts just to get laid
cussing sinning and drinking profuse
just to forget all the pain and abuse
wishfull the days and dream filled nights
monotany reigns and so do the fights
how sour my thoughts when the visions they see
are just my own dreams my dreams minus me
silence shouts loudly out over the tears
let go of all hope and have no fears
For the god lord he wont make it all bad
you can never be happy without being sad
so the days and the nights finally come close
right before i take to the views i apose
over and over descisions we make
just to be sure we get into the take
When the love finally comes to bid its fairwell
you have only achieved to be king of all hell
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Old 02-19-2006, 02:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 02-20-2006, 09:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I enjoyed reading it although I can relate to the feeling it describes. Good job
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Old 02-22-2006, 08:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 02-22-2006, 08:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks you guys
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Old 02-22-2006, 11:31 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Old 02-24-2006, 07:56 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 02-25-2006, 02:12 PM   #8 (permalink)
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That's awesome. And I totally get the Johnny Cash thing.
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