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Old 02-13-2006, 01:33 AM   #1 (permalink)
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insomnia

insominia is like a dream that has no begining and no end

it is vague with unclear glimpses at the truth

a mixture of fatigue and energy overwell the senses

with heavy eyes you try to sleep only to be stirred by the silence

you get up because you are lying there awake

but are interupted by the exhaustion within

so the cycle goes untill you sleep or wake

neither being clear till the insomnia passes as swiftly as it comes
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Old 02-13-2006, 10:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Insomnia sucks big giant donkey balls!

Glad I've been sleeping better lately.

Oh, and sweet poem.
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Old 02-13-2006, 11:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 02-14-2006, 11:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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That about covers it. Nicely written.
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Old 02-15-2006, 02:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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good interperation. reminds me of my last few weeks.
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Old 02-15-2006, 07:55 PM   #6 (permalink)
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thanks guys
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Old 02-16-2006, 08:20 AM   #7 (permalink)
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good read bro
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Old 02-16-2006, 10:19 AM   #8 (permalink)
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i dig it!!

and insomnia stinks
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Old 02-16-2006, 04:15 PM   #9 (permalink)
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i swear i have been a constant insomniac for months now, it sucks so bad. Then when i do sleep, god couldnt wake me if i pissed on his post taosties
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Old 02-19-2006, 02:30 PM   #10 (permalink)
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i have class so it sucks like whoa. so i usually take tylenol pm to make me fall asleep
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Old 02-25-2006, 02:13 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I like that a lot. It really puts the feelings into words. Well done.
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