i have never wrote or even tried, but here

jimes · 02-09-2006, 09:46 PM

Confusion and passion twirl within

a lifetime of familiarity and habbit

old becomes new and new becomes old

love jealousy envy and trust collide

emotions have grown strong feelings erupt

aspiring dreams become daily ambitions

sadness fades as the void is filled

HarlotsBeast · 02-10-2006, 01:51 AM

That is quite a nice and warm piece there... gets the emotion and feeling out for the reader...

stina · 02-10-2006, 08:58 PM

i like it

02-09-2006, 09:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
jimes Insane Dementia Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 31 Posts: 91 My Mood:	i have never wrote or even tried, but here Confusion and passion twirl within a lifetime of familiarity and habbit old becomes new and new becomes old love jealousy envy and trust collide emotions have grown strong feelings erupt aspiring dreams become daily ambitions sadness fades as the void is filled __________________ OH PORCELAIN GOD I BOW TO THEE. AS I PUKE OPON ONE KNEE. ALCOHOL POISONING IS JUST IN MY HEAD, OR WILL I DIE DRY HEAVING IN BED?

02-10-2006, 01:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	That is quite a nice and warm piece there... gets the emotion and feeling out for the reader... __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-10-2006, 08:58 PM	#3 (permalink)
stina Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Private Age: 24 Posts: 2,440 My Mood:	i like it

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