i dont have a title for this

purple_fusion_87 · 02-08-2006, 08:09 AM

She glides the razor blade upon her skin, once again. She wants to believe it’s all a dream. Hoping it’ll vanish, not becoming a reality. As the thoughts flash, the blade finishes its final touches. Her eyes are the reminder, as she tries to hide the remains of her past. Each cut becomes a story forever embedded in her body.

this poem i wrote about my sister...

TheLoneOne · 02-08-2006, 08:12 AM

very sad... but I like it

stina · 02-08-2006, 12:58 PM

i agree. sad but i like it

HarlotsBeast · 02-08-2006, 01:14 PM

The all too real ones are the ones that I've found to be the most difficult in titling.

Very good.

purple_fusion_87 · 02-09-2006, 07:44 AM

thanx...

stina · 02-10-2006, 09:22 PM

you should start publishing your stuff, girl

Gilgar · 02-11-2006, 10:55 AM

I'm thinking maybe an HoC compilation. It's something to think about. Most of what we see here is worhty of print.

stina · 02-11-2006, 09:09 PM

do it!
i used to publish my old stuff. i got into a few books and such.
its worth doing

purple_fusion_87 · 02-13-2006, 08:21 AM

yea i have some on poetry.com

stina · 02-16-2006, 11:24 AM

awesome

CuteKitten2C · 02-25-2006, 02:14 PM

That is really sad but well written.

purple_fusion_87 · 02-27-2006, 07:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CuteKitten2C

That is really sad but well written.

thanx

CuteKitten2C · 03-03-2006, 10:41 AM

you are very welcome. Thank you for sharing it with us.

purple_fusion_87 · 03-03-2006, 10:49 AM

yep yep.. i have more on my site...http://www.geocities.com/im_the_road...eads_nowhere05

CuteKitten2C · 03-04-2006, 08:27 PM

cool. Im gonna check it out!

purple_fusion_87 · 03-04-2006, 10:30 PM

awesome...tell what you think about them

02-08-2006, 08:09 AM	#1 (permalink)
purple_fusion_87 Blow Pop of Doom Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,367 My Mood:	i dont have a title for this She glides the razor blade upon her skin, once again. She wants to believe it’s all a dream. Hoping it’ll vanish, not becoming a reality. As the thoughts flash, the blade finishes its final touches. Her eyes are the reminder, as she tries to hide the remains of her past. Each cut becomes a story forever embedded in her body. this poem i wrote about my sister...

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HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	The all too real ones are the ones that I've found to be the most difficult in titling. Very good. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

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Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	I'm thinking maybe an HoC compilation. It's something to think about. Most of what we see here is worhty of print. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

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CuteKitten2C Sexy Party Coordinator Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 25 Posts: 6,338 My Mood:	That is really sad but well written. __________________ The Army is my husband's mistress and sometimes that bitch gets all the attention.

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stina Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Private Age: 24 Posts: 2,440 My Mood:	i agree. sad but i like it

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stina Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Private Age: 24 Posts: 2,440 My Mood:	you should start publishing your stuff, girl

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stina Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Private Age: 24 Posts: 2,440 My Mood:	do it! i used to publish my old stuff. i got into a few books and such. its worth doing

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