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Old 01-25-2006, 09:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
adtatham
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What have i done?

What have I done?

I went to a friends house on new years eve
I had nowhere else to go and neither did you
You walked throught the door and I instantly fell
But it couldnt be then and there, you were taken
Time went on and destiny seemed to be unraveling our future
a future that seemed to be one

If heaven could be any sweeter
I cant wait to die
My world could be hell
youd melt it away with a kiss
hello Daddy
echoing all through the house
And the times, oh the times
you called me beautiful

how can you stand there
without shedding a tear
How can your face show no emotion
Isnt the pain tearing you up inside
does your heart feel
like its breaking in two
do you ask yourself
What have I done.

Strike one
lets try it again
the love we share
just cant be denied
two hearts at fault
the blames on me
we share a home
but not our minds
what is a love without trust?
nothing.

How can you stand there
without shedding a tear
how can your face show no emotion
The pains tearing me up in side
my heart is ripping to peices
i scream to my self over again
oh God, what have i done?

Oh God, what Have I Done?
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Old 01-25-2006, 10:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 01-26-2006, 07:50 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 01-26-2006, 10:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 01-26-2006, 04:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The suspense is killing me! What have you done?!?!

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