01-25-2006, 02:29 AM
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| Entirely Too Lickable  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood:   | Velvet Dreams... lost poem... I wrote this poem during an odd time in my life. I thought it was lost for the longest time until tonight. I haven't reread it yet but I'm going to post it anyway. Basically, I'll be reading for the first time just as many of you will the first people to read this... Velvet Dreams Velvet kiss on my cheek liquid hugs and crystalline dreams flowing and ebbying inward toward my soul echoes of the life I've lived richoet off the memories of past lives drifting down this river of recollection following a never-ending tale Writing history and living the future encounters on the way, people to meet joining life at intervals, peeking in insanity and clear-headedness go hand in hand slipping down the lanes of light and sugar maple leaves and pine needles softly crunching under my soles breaking the silence in my head peppermint incense wafts into my nose bringing 'round yuletide memories families gather and laughter resounds tenor resonations and alto tinklings familiar voices, happy faces, bright and smiling photographs and memories crystalline dreams, velveting kisses, liquid hugs warmth and happiness, dreamy eyes Gently I hold your hand in cloudlined hands you hold my heart Velvetine kisses ground me to this life Liquid hugs hold me to you crystalline dreams keep me going
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01-25-2006, 12:58 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood:   | My vote is for meth or acid. But it's good nonetheless. You have a way with the visuals.
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01-25-2006, 03:13 PM
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| Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood: | Thanks guys. I think it may have been meth but I can't remember. I had this one dated and I wrote it back in September of '02.
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Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? 
