i'm bad with titles...

PrettyLuckyGurl · 11-14-2005, 12:42 AM

left to black
opposites attract
physical beauty is fleeting
but enticing
so hot
beats a mile a millisecond
your voice makes me notice
your physical prowess
because I have learned to concentrate
on the syllabic
of your tongue
love me like
you resonate you do
I love you too

Johnboat · 11-16-2005, 03:04 PM

I like the short ones that say a lot.

PrettyLuckyGurl · 11-16-2005, 03:35 PM

thank you...

my poems are usually short...i am better with less words...i think

TheLoneOne · 11-17-2005, 06:54 AM

IIIIII LIKE it

PrettyLuckyGurl · 11-17-2005, 08:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LoneShadow

IIIIII LIKE it

IIIIIIIIIIIIIIII'M GLAD

hehe

Gilgar · 11-18-2005, 01:24 PM

spank me and call me peter pan that wasn't bad.

silencer69 · 11-18-2005, 01:55 PM

I know this is completely (or at least mostly) off topic, so I'll apologize to Britt in advance....

...but every time I look at the title of this thread, at first I think it says "I'm bad with titties"

lmao

RunsonInsanity · 11-18-2005, 09:52 PM

Nice job, love the poem!

PrettyLuckyGurl · 11-19-2005, 04:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RunsonInsanity

Nice job, love the poem!

thank you ... I quite like it too.

there is something not quite right with it though...not sure what needs to be reworked yet...but i will figure it out

11-14-2005, 12:42 AM	#1 (permalink)
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PrettyLuckyGurl go ninja. Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Texas Age: 23 Posts: 407 My Mood:	thank you... my poems are usually short...i am better with less words...i think __________________ Kiss Me

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Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	spank me and call me peter pan that wasn't bad. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

11-18-2005, 01:55 PM	#7 (permalink)
silencer69 Darkside Tour Guide Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: West Virginia Age: 38 Posts: 1,283 My Mood:	I know this is completely (or at least mostly) off topic, so I'll apologize to Britt in advance.... ...but every time I look at the title of this thread, at first I think it says "I'm bad with titties" lmao __________________ I am the bullet in the gun, I am the truth from which you run I am the Silencing Machine, I am the end of all your dreams. Before you criticize someone else, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you're a mile away, and you have their shoes.

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