10-20-2005, 06:01 AM
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| Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Private Age: 30
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My Mood:  | Found *work in progress* Guess I've always been looking In one way or another Always stretching my thoughts Hoping to connect Found you once, and lost you Thought it was all over Wrote us off as a might have been Till that crazy day Your words took my wind away And with it all my fears Knowing that being back with you Would end my search at last Now I look into your eyes And I cannot ignore I lose myself every time Then you find me again
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10-20-2005, 11:05 PM
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| Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Private Age: 30
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My Mood: | Thanks!  That's the general thought anyway. I need to rework it cause rhythm and rhyme are important to me, and it doesn't flow very smoothly. If I can get it any closer to what I want, I'll repost it.
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10-22-2005, 12:06 PM
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| Bam's Bish  Join Date: May 2004 Location: Kansas Age: 28
Posts: 501
My Mood:    | Squeak's a lucky man
__________________ wait for the guy who calls you beautiful,the guy who will stay awake just to watch you sleep, who kisses your forehead and thinks you are the prettiest when you have no makeup on,the guy who wants to show you off to the world when you are in your sweats,holds your hand in front of his friends,wait for the guy who would do anything just to spend time with you and truly believes he is the lucky one,wait for the guy who turns to his friends and says "she is the one" |
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The Army is my husband's mistress and sometimes that bitch gets all the attention. 
