08-18-2005, 03:21 AM
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| Entirely Too Lickable  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood:   | Forgotten Youth Another Anagram. Short sentences only. No single words. It's that easy. It's also that difficult. Have fun and make me proud. I'll post mine after I get some sleep today. Remember, it's called FORGOTTEN YOUTH.
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08-22-2005, 12:33 PM
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| Krazed Addicted Master  Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30
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My Mood:   | how's this? Forced into lifelong servitude Ousted from childhoods grace Ripped from joyous wonderment Gripped with such responsibility Old man, like his father, he's become Treating life as it should never be The treacherous burden it now is Envying those other souls Never again savoring the grace of youth Yesterday's long since gone Or any rememberance of such joy Under the prison he's made himself The father he must now become Hopelessness against his now adult life
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08-22-2005, 01:44 PM
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| Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood: | I almost forgot about this one... That is quite an awesome poem. I like very much. Now that someone has posted in here I may as well work on mine. Good time killer while on break from mowing the lawn today.
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08-22-2005, 01:50 PM
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| Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood: | Feelings of despair Overrunning every thought Reach deep inside Grasp what you got Only you can Take control Turn yourself around Enlighten your darkness Never look back Young blood Optimistic views Underlined by pessimistic upbringings Together we can laugh Holding hands That's the best I can do right now... not really in line with the title but, if you look deeper you should be able to see it.
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08-22-2005, 05:57 PM
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| Sexy Party Coordinator  Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 25
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My Mood:  | wow those are both really good. I would try also but I am not poetic at all. But I really enjoyed reading yours. 
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