another of mine

08-15-2005, 11:10 AM

a bit dark but then again half of mine are

Pain
----

slowly walking down the hall,
nightmares flow through my mind.
My mind is locked on darkness's call.
my sanity has lost its mind.

The shadows stirr amidst the dark of the room.
A second look; there is nothing there.
Voices echo in my head,
causing me endless dread.

Bloody tears forever flow,
and my eyes are doomed forever to see.
Wails of pain,
full of sorrow; that in my head forever shall echo.

Madness flows like water, fear stands out like stone.
My heart beats like crazy, my mind is running free.
To be all by yourself, alone yet not alone,
Within myself, without myself all alone with no one but me.

written October 23, 2001 by Robert Bennett

TheLoneOne · 08-15-2005, 11:14 AM

very nice, yet sad read.

just hope things are better for ya bro!

08-15-2005, 11:17 AM

thanks the hard times come and they go guess thats life.

CuteKitten2C · 08-15-2005, 02:04 PM

I am glad you are sharing more of your poetry!

08-15-2005, 04:22 PM

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Originally Posted by CuteKitten2C

I am glad you are sharing more of your poetry!

lol most of my poetry is available on my webpage (available in my profile, which by an amazing coincidence is available from this site wich is available on the internet.......lol)

CuteKitten2C · 08-15-2005, 04:26 PM

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Originally Posted by omegaluke

lol most of my poetry is available on my webpage (available in my profile, which by an amazing coincidence is available from this site wich is available on the internet.......lol)

well I know that but I dont know how many other people realized that.

08-15-2005, 04:32 PM

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Originally Posted by CuteKitten2C

well I know that but I dont know how many other people realized that.

how many realized it? all of the ones who knew that realized it hehe the others havent realized it hehe

CuteKitten2C · 08-15-2005, 06:07 PM

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Originally Posted by omegaluke

how many realized it? all of the ones who knew that realized it hehe the others havent realized it hehe

oh my brain.

08-15-2005, 06:34 PM

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Originally Posted by CuteKitten2C

oh my brain.

lol think thats brain rattling wait till i get started sometimes i even have to backtrack to catch what i lost when i typed it the first time through :P

CuteKitten2C · 08-15-2005, 06:38 PM

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Originally Posted by omegaluke

lol think thats brain rattling wait till i get started sometimes i even have to backtrack to catch what i lost when i typed it the first time through :P

god I must be tired.

08-15-2005, 11:10 AM	#1 (permalink)
omegaluke Guest Posts: n/a My Mood:	another of mine a bit dark but then again half of mine are Pain ---- slowly walking down the hall, nightmares flow through my mind. My mind is locked on darkness's call. my sanity has lost its mind. The shadows stirr amidst the dark of the room. A second look; there is nothing there. Voices echo in my head, causing me endless dread. Bloody tears forever flow, and my eyes are doomed forever to see. Wails of pain, full of sorrow; that in my head forever shall echo. Madness flows like water, fear stands out like stone. My heart beats like crazy, my mind is running free. To be all by yourself, alone yet not alone, Within myself, without myself all alone with no one but me. written October 23, 2001 by Robert Bennett

08-15-2005, 11:14 AM	#2 (permalink)
TheLoneOne Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 2,796 My Mood:	very nice, yet sad read. just hope things are better for ya bro! __________________ Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? Sorry... must've missed it.

08-15-2005, 02:04 PM	#4 (permalink)
CuteKitten2C Sexy Party Coordinator Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 25 Posts: 6,338 My Mood:	I am glad you are sharing more of your poetry! __________________ The Army is my husband's mistress and sometimes that bitch gets all the attention.

08-15-2005, 11:17 AM	#3 (permalink)
omegaluke Guest Posts: n/a My Mood:	thanks the hard times come and they go guess thats life.

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