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Old 08-15-2005, 10:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Wrote this one a while ago, and felt in the mood to share it

If only i could cry

Have you ever felt a great pain, a sorrow beyond believe.
and been unable to cry?
To easily hurt and to hurt hard, and not be able to cry?

To ache and to morn and only squeeze a single salty tear.
If only i could cry, so much pain would be let free.
If only i could show the pain building up inside.

Let me cry, please let me cry i beg to no one at all.
let me sob, and let me whine.
Yet when i hurt and my heart needs freeing,
my eyes barely seem to wet.

I havent cried in years, though my feelings push and scream.
Loss and sorrow, hurt and pain,
never more than a few tiny drops is all my eyes will give....
I wonder shall i ever cry again?

If only i could cry i feel i could truly live.

robert bennett january 10, 2003 12:42 am
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Old 08-15-2005, 10:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it and can definitely relate to it. it's been a good long while since I've truly broke down and cried.
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Old 08-15-2005, 10:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
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