Revenge

Wit · 08-13-2005, 11:14 PM

The acidic taste of failure
fast upon my tongue
burning indegestion
of woes that go unsung
Blinded by your candor
gutted by your love
sickened by the question
blindsided from above
Flayed in the intensity
I kneel here on the ground
bleeding broken memories
tossed in lost and found
Downed by the hypocrisy
burning in your eyes
Healed by the elation of
plotting your due demise.

crying_tinkerbell · 08-13-2005, 11:19 PM

i am loving this... its great.. wonderful writting...

Wit · 08-13-2005, 11:21 PM

Thanks!!

TheLoneOne · 08-15-2005, 10:13 AM

I LIKE IT!

Wit · 08-15-2005, 10:31 AM

Thanks!!!

TheLoneOne · 08-15-2005, 10:36 AM

I've actually felt that way about some really nasty people. of course, never acted on it though. revenge is such a petty concept, because why get even since it makes you sink to their level. <3

Wit · 08-15-2005, 10:42 AM

AGreed..

08-15-2005, 11:02 AM

very well written, Ive had my share of feelings like that too

08-13-2005, 11:14 PM	#1 (permalink)
Wit Seasonal Defiant Join Date: May 2005 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 334 My Mood:	Revenge The acidic taste of failure fast upon my tongue burning indegestion of woes that go unsung Blinded by your candor gutted by your love sickened by the question blindsided from above Flayed in the intensity I kneel here on the ground bleeding broken memories tossed in lost and found Downed by the hypocrisy burning in your eyes Healed by the elation of plotting your due demise.

08-13-2005, 11:19 PM	#2 (permalink)
crying_tinkerbell Schizoid Insominac Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Private Age: 24 Posts: 177 My Mood:	i am loving this... its great.. wonderful writting... __________________ i'm nothing but a liar that tells the truth... THE SACRAMENT IS YOU

08-15-2005, 10:13 AM	#4 (permalink)
TheLoneOne Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 2,796 My Mood:	I LIKE IT! __________________ Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? Sorry... must've missed it.

08-15-2005, 10:36 AM	#6 (permalink)
TheLoneOne Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 2,796 My Mood:	I've actually felt that way about some really nasty people. of course, never acted on it though. revenge is such a petty concept, because why get even since it makes you sink to their level. <3 __________________ Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? Sorry... must've missed it.

08-13-2005, 11:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
Wit Seasonal Defiant Join Date: May 2005 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 334 My Mood:	Thanks!!

08-15-2005, 10:31 AM	#5 (permalink)
Wit Seasonal Defiant Join Date: May 2005 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 334 My Mood:	Thanks!!!

08-15-2005, 10:42 AM	#7 (permalink)
Wit Seasonal Defiant Join Date: May 2005 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 334 My Mood:	AGreed..

08-15-2005, 11:02 AM	#8 (permalink)
omegaluke Guest Posts: n/a My Mood:	very well written, Ive had my share of feelings like that too

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