08-11-2005, 11:16 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood:    | ATTN: Topher I've posted this one before but I thought you might like it. I AM I am your sinister urge. I am a figure shrouded in darkness. I am wrapped in the shadows of a death shroud. I am the night walker, the lone stalker. I am the blackness in mans heart. I am the tainted part of your soul. I am the dark half of your reflection. I am why children see monsters in closets. I am you like to be scared. I am he, I am she, I am you, I am me. I am hope and despair, I am longing and betrayl. I am the ultimate product of society. You will meet me in the future, until then I wish you well. If I'm not mistaken it got decent review last time let me know what you think.
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08-11-2005, 03:56 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | The most common comment I've got on it was the repetition. A lot of people noticed that most not nessicarily what the lines said. My favorite lines are the tainted part of your soul and the last line. I think it gives a feeling of a doomed future. It's one of my faves.
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08-11-2005, 04:12 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | This one is a bit unusual for me because it doesn't reek of despair but here goes. A thirst for vengance a taste for blood, it carries them through the years. Instilling in us a mortal dread, all our darkest fears. They hunt in darkness, lurk in shadows, and weep only bloody tears. They show everything it means to be living on a mortal coil. But they have countless centuries and much time for evil toil. They are in the background of every historical scene. Guiding the players, directing the wars, causing great amounts of pain. But take heart o' weary mortal there are others to be found. Hiding from only the shadows and not resting till all the darkness be slain.
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08-11-2005, 06:06 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | I had no idea you were a foamy fan. Please tell me you know writhe and shine as well. They rock.
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I didn't even think about that last line... until now... I like.
