08-06-2005, 04:58 AM
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| Entirely Too Lickable  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood:   | New poem (kinda)... I was dealing with some major writer's block and when I finally started to get over most of it, this is what I ended up with... The Living Failure... In the shine of fading eyes Misery and happiness collide In the shallow beating of a blackened heart Death and life mingle nonchalantly Burning urges of death and drugs Gripping this cross-wired brain One shot, two shot, three shot, four Fat joint, paper tab, long line, more Out at midnight, wasted by one Whiskey comments and cocaine whispers Followed by a cloudy choke and spotted sight Nothing matters, at two-thirty in the morning Everything fades by three. One shot, big hit, fat rail, floor. Sinster urges and black fat night Mixing with the empty gazes of plastic life. 151 and a blaze to match. One Shot, Two Shot, Three Shot, More Whiskey, Weed, Speed Galore!! Failure to reconstruct the death Of a wasted soul and forgotten genius Stepped right up and clicked delete. Double shootin, bong hitter, spun out whore The mirror doesn't lie at four in the morning The fuzz on your mind is only temporary If you live to be a thousand.... I had to stop there because I couldn't think of anything... let me know what y'all think. and by all means... let's get some more poetry going...
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08-06-2005, 06:55 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood:   | Another tragic tale of misbent youth. Me likes. 
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08-07-2005, 05:20 AM
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My Mood: | Okay... seeing as how most of the threads have something to do with perversion, bitching/pissing/moaning/whining.... I'm going to add to my own thread of poetry... since I seem to be about the only one that has any to add.... The next two posts are going to be things I've written over the last year and a half... Bear with me... I was in a deep depression and gripped by drugs and alcohol...
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08-07-2005, 05:29 AM
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My Mood: | This one is called Push It Down.. My first true attempt at writing a song... something between what's now called Emo and Metal... Push It Down by Topher J. Sitting here on a grey rainy day mixed tensions weighing on my chest blurry mix of emotions adding to my pain How do I deal with your shit? Fuck It! Push it down! Fuck It All! Push it down! Fuck It All! Fuck it all and push it down! The days growing old and passing me by Light decays into bleakest night burdened with unknown blame What did I do to you? What happened to cause all of this? What do I do to cure what ails me? Fuck It! Push it down! Fuck It All! Push it down! Fuck It All! Fuck it all and push it down! A shimmer of light flashes by blinding bright and fading fast speeding away before I can understand Who was I to you? What am I to this world? Who will I become? Who will cure what ails me? Fuck It! Push it down! Fuck It All! Push it down! Push It Down! Fuck It! Fuck It All! Push It Down! Forget It! Fuck It All! Push It Down! Fade Away! Fade Away! Fuck It ALL! Push Me Down!
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08-07-2005, 05:34 AM
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My Mood: | This next one is kind of stupid and lame but that's what happens Too Late It Is Revealed by Topher J Dreams of you dance about my head silently from the corner of the room I watch you, absorb you into my memory watching you go about life Smiling, ever smiling Thoughts of you bounce about my mind wishing I knew what to say wanting to make you happy to be capable of keeping your love forever wanting Why can't I understand this life? Is it too complicated to comprehend? or is ti just too plain and simple that I read too much into it? Confusion, oh so confused Can you see me sitting here? with these thoughts and dreams and wishes? Can you see them tearing me up inside? Tearing down the man I was turning me into a lost and scared child Trembling, terribly cold inside Dreams of you bound about in my waking hours thoughts of what I should understand, fleeting confusion blinding the simplicity of it all tears of life running down my cheek
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08-07-2005, 10:39 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | I like the second one more than the first. I think the first rule of poetry should be dont think lowly of your own writing someone will always like it. Besides your better than me and I thought i was a pretty good poet. Maybe I"ll post some more of mine on here.
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08-08-2005, 04:58 AM
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My Mood: | Okay, this one, as far as I was told was written by someone in northern mn back in the early 90's late 80's... I've seen variations of it since I first started posting it for others to see so who knows for sure... It is an extremely sad and truthful poem and even more so since one of the bars in my area is mentioned in it... and this had happened here in the mid-80's... Child Abuse by : "The Kids of Today" My name is Mikey, I am but three, my eyes are swollen, I cannot see. I must not be bad, that lesson I've learned. For I am punished by cigarette burns. I must do right, I cannot do wrong, or else I am locked up all week long. And when I awake I am alone. The house is dark, my parents are not home. Deep down inside I feel so sad for I am hated by my mom and dad. I am just an expensive joke. the need more money for speed and coke. An accident, yes, that's the word. Countless times that phrase I've heard. An extra burden they must endure. Be quiet now, I hear a car. My father is home from Charlie's bar. I hear him cuss, my name he calls. I squeeze myself against the wall. Oh dear lord it is too late, his face is turning into hate. I feel the pain, again and again. Oh dear Lord, please let it end. My name was Mikey, I was but three. Last night my father murdered me.
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08-09-2005, 10:14 AM
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My Mood: | Yeah, it is harsh. And also very sad because of the reality of it. I think I know the song you're talking about... but I'm not too sure so I can't comment on that for fear of making myself look like a total fool... I'd rather do that by posting my poetry and reading the feedback instead. And on that note, I'm going to find the next one to post (and hope that eventually someone else starts posting anything of theirs. *crosses fingers*).
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08-09-2005, 10:24 AM
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My Mood: | Okay... I can't make up my mind on which one to post right now so I'm just gonna get this one on here that makes no sense and has no title.. I wrote it for a contest on an old poetry site I was a member of back about 5 years ago. I'm pretty sure I was sober when I wrote this but.... Anywho... here it is... Flick over skin tawdry candle always dominate you trying as they control memory holding root leaving smoke opium tea leaving ruin you are strewn in piles domino over roach testament sonic garbage trucks down your candle is one memory
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08-09-2005, 02:56 PM
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My Mood: | In the 5 years I've had that one I never realized one thing about it... the undertones of drug use/abuse in it... aside from the opium part that is... seems like an acid trip gone lyrical... But, I'll take the Odd as a compliment.
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08-09-2005, 02:57 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | Bear with me on this one I was only 15 or 16 when I wrote it. Reflections of smoke in the clear blue water, my world brought down in flames. There's nothing I can do. I have suffered all great punishments, I've known the truest shame. And still, There's nothing I can do. Through all this there is one thing I hope you know is true. I love you. Through all the things that burn you through I hope you know this too. There's nothing I wouldn't do for you, I wish you loved me too. |
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08-09-2005, 03:19 PM
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My Mood: | That's a good piece of work ya got... short, simple and to the point yet rather descriptive.  And I didn't think it as an insult... I prefer "odd" over most others... I'm just a freak that way.
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08-12-2005, 12:01 PM
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My Mood: | Imagine This (circa 1993) Imagine this a moonlit night a passionate kiss two souls in flight Imagine the feeling one of desire one I am needing a life to inspire Imagine a life one so true to end my strife to always be with you Imagine this a starry eve unending bliss which I will never leave
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08-12-2005, 12:04 PM
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My Mood: | Passion (circa 1995) Tender touch arousal begins light the torch desire wins caressing hands soothing kisses flowing in bands sensual wishes Erotic fantasy exotic feeling sexual fancy shyness fleeing Pleasure climaxing orgasmic shudders energy taxing breathing flutters Pleasure unparalleled eternal ecstacy bodies meld calm as a glass sea Poetic Sex
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