Hollow Man...

TheLoneOne · 08-02-2005, 01:55 PM

Exquisite emptiness
Filling the vast void within
No happiness, no joy
Nor anger, or sorrow
Only nothingness fills this place
What can you possibly do
With someone who refuses to feel
Except to feel nothing at all
Upon his face no smile or frown
No expression left save one
A blank canvas, waiting to be
To take shape and form
If only it were so
His eyes pools of black
No trace of what he was
Nor any of what he is now
Merely a ghost in a shell
Just a hollow vessel
Of the man he used to be

Gilgar · 08-02-2005, 03:49 PM

Good poem Brandon but did you have a bad day today?

Thanx for sharing

**ByteMeHere** · 12-21-2006, 10:20 AM

I do hope that whatever in you was inspired to write this, has went away. Although a very good poem, it is sad. AND I hope you dont truely feel this way.

08-02-2005, 01:55 PM	#1 (permalink)
TheLoneOne Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 2,796 My Mood:	Hollow Man... Exquisite emptiness Filling the vast void within No happiness, no joy Nor anger, or sorrow Only nothingness fills this place What can you possibly do With someone who refuses to feel Except to feel nothing at all Upon his face no smile or frown No expression left save one A blank canvas, waiting to be To take shape and form If only it were so His eyes pools of black No trace of what he was Nor any of what he is now Merely a ghost in a shell Just a hollow vessel Of the man he used to be __________________ Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? Sorry... must've missed it.

08-02-2005, 03:49 PM	#2 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	Good poem Brandon but did you have a bad day today? Thanx for sharing __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

12-21-2006, 10:20 AM	#3 (permalink)
ByteMeHere Bam's Bish Site Owner Join Date: May 2004 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 1,070 My Mood:	I do hope that whatever in you was inspired to write this, has went away. Although a very good poem, it is sad. AND I hope you dont truely feel this way. __________________

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