the circle, complete

raindrops · 05-24-2008, 03:55 PM

yea, I know, been gone a long time, more on that elsewhere and later...

my Memorial Day poem...

the circle, complete

and i hid there behind his carcass eating bullets that were meant for me, for you
and all you've got to say is buddy can you spare a dime
when you couldn't spare a nickel's worth of sorrow
for the bloodshed that you had me bring right to your sill
500 channels and it's all live all we ever wanted
was everything clickclickclick and the mag's empty
and the body's full of lead but he's long dead
so who's really to blame

blood never lies

live every day like it's your first, love like it's your last
and don't forget me when the sun comes out again

blood only cries

a child wakes up in her mother's arms, and the guns are silent

until then, we have to lock and load

that's your bones in the dirt now, step up

blood brings blood

HarlotsBeast · 05-29-2008, 10:13 AM

Wow. Not sure what to say to that but Wow. I like this one.

05-24-2008, 03:55 PM	#1 (permalink)
raindrops always falling somewhere Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: California Age: 43 Posts: 399 My Mood:	the circle, complete yea, I know, been gone a long time, more on that elsewhere and later... my Memorial Day poem... the circle, complete and i hid there behind his carcass eating bullets that were meant for me, for you and all you've got to say is buddy can you spare a dime when you couldn't spare a nickel's worth of sorrow for the bloodshed that you had me bring right to your sill 500 channels and it's all live all we ever wanted was everything clickclickclick and the mag's empty and the body's full of lead but he's long dead so who's really to blame blood never lies live every day like it's your first, love like it's your last and don't forget me when the sun comes out again blood only cries a child wakes up in her mother's arms, and the guns are silent until then, we have to lock and load that's your bones in the dirt now, step up blood brings blood Last edited by raindrops; 05-30-2008 at 09:37 PM.

05-29-2008, 10:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,654 My Mood:	Re: the circle, complete Wow. Not sure what to say to that but Wow. I like this one. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

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