House of Crazed
     
Forums
 
UserCP
 
FAQ
 
Patients
Register Arcade Gallery Groups About
Go Back   House of Crazed > Words From A Crazed Mind > Poetic Justice
P3tz Search Links Contact Us

Poetic Justice Come here to share your poems and rhymes.

Sponsored Links

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools
Old 10-14-2006, 02:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
Survivor
Psychotic Poet Laureate
 
Survivor's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Minnesota
Age: 44
Posts: 103
My Mood:
Accepting Defeat

Accepting Defeat

There was a time when I had it all
Things were good and I could stand tall
It seems like that was so long ago
When I lost it, it was quite a blow

I lost it all right out of the blue
All of the sudden you and I were through
I never even got a second chance
Or even a warning in advance

I can’t believe my life is ending
I just can’t keep on pretending
That everything will be all right
I just need to give up the fight

Surrender and just accept defeat
And accept the fact that I’ve been beat
I lost a battle that shouldn’t have been
Too bad you don’t remember when

Remember back when we had it good
I’d go back if there was any way I could
I wish I knew just where we went bad
And we lost everything that we had

It doesn’t matter because you don’t care
At least you got me out of your hair
Since that seems to be all that you wanted
I hope your dreams at night are haunted

I hope that it was worth it for you
I’ll never get the chance to start anew
I have no will to live any more
I lost that when you closed the door

Don’t act shocked when I am gone
You should be happy that you won
What did you really win? Tell me
Must be something I couldn’t see
__________________
Amor Itaque Excessum, Unus Itaque Idem Eadem Idem
Survivor is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-14-2006, 06:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
adtatham
Schizoid Insominac
 
adtatham's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: Ohio
Age: 27
Posts: 19
My Mood:
wow, sounds like some of the times that I went through.
__________________
What is love but the threshold to pain and agony
adtatham is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2006, 12:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast
Entirely Too Lickable
 
HarlotsBeast's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Wisconsin
Age: 29
Posts: 2,656
My Mood:
Send a message via Yahoo to HarlotsBeast
Holy shit man... I don't really know what to say about this...
__________________
Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?
HarlotsBeast is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

  House of Crazed > Words From A Crazed Mind > Poetic Justice



Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


All times are GMT -7. The time now is 07:06 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.0
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.0.0
Template-Modifikationen durch TMS
Contents from the House of Crazed are copyrighted by the House of Crazed.