My Heart

Survivor · 10-01-2006, 11:49 AM

My heart is shattered
The pieces scattered
Betrayal of trust
Turned it to dust

HarlotsBeast · 10-03-2006, 09:05 AM

Damn, that's gotta be the shortest one I've seen on here. And damned good too.

DomesticGoddess · 10-03-2006, 09:11 AM

amazing.....

CuteKitten2C · 10-04-2006, 04:36 PM

short and too the point. I like it.

Ian1972 · 10-04-2006, 04:38 PM

Very good...gets right to the point.

Survivor · 10-04-2006, 10:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HarlotsBeast

Damn, that's gotta be the shortest one I've seen on here. And damned good too.

It is by far the shortest one I wrote, it just came to me when I was driving so I wrote it down and it seemed to say what I wanted at the time so I didn't expand on it.

HarlotsBeast · 10-04-2006, 11:31 PM

Good move there then.

BTW, Friday. Get ahold of me.

texascwby692000 · 10-05-2006, 04:05 AM

good one!!! wish i could write.... oh well

10-01-2006, 11:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
Survivor Psychotic Poet Laureate Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Minnesota Age: 44 Posts: 103 My Mood:	My Heart My heart is shattered The pieces scattered Betrayal of trust Turned it to dust __________________ Amor Itaque Excessum, Unus Itaque Idem Eadem Idem

10-03-2006, 09:05 AM	#2 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	Damn, that's gotta be the shortest one I've seen on here. And damned good too. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

10-04-2006, 04:36 PM	#4 (permalink)
CuteKitten2C Sexy Party Coordinator Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 25 Posts: 6,338 My Mood:	short and too the point. I like it. __________________ The Army is my husband's mistress and sometimes that bitch gets all the attention.

10-04-2006, 11:31 PM	#7 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	Good move there then. BTW, Friday. Get ahold of me. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

10-03-2006, 09:11 AM	#3 (permalink)
DomesticGoddess Autistic Terror Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Florida Age: 34 Posts: 163 My Mood:	amazing.....

10-04-2006, 04:38 PM	#5 (permalink)
Ian1972 Brief Psychotic Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: California Age: 36 Posts: 36 My Mood:	Very good...gets right to the point.

10-05-2006, 04:05 AM	#8 (permalink)
texascwby692000 Banned BANNED Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Private Age: 32 Posts: 1,550 My Mood:	good one!!! wish i could write.... oh well

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