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Survivor · 09-30-2006, 11:02 PM

I search for peace
Or some release
From this pain
That rots my brain

I found a fight
That wasn't right
My brain still rots
With twisted thoughts

HarlotsBeast · 10-01-2006, 04:44 AM

Good to see you posting again Dean. I really like this one.

DomesticGoddess · 10-01-2006, 07:29 AM

Shadows

As the sun goes down
they begin to gather.
Abundant, dark
and growing.
Creeping up behind
touching everything in their path
and moving on.
Leaving no apparent
trace of their existance
as the soft gloaming
slips into darkest night.
And with the last shards of light,
they dance, pull back,
and are gone.

texascwby692000 · 10-01-2006, 07:46 AM

dang you all should go and get published!!!! both of these are good!!!!

09-30-2006, 11:02 PM	#1 (permalink)
Survivor Psychotic Poet Laureate Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Minnesota Age: 44 Posts: 103 My Mood:	My Search I search for peace Or some release From this pain That rots my brain I found a fight That wasn't right My brain still rots With twisted thoughts __________________ Amor Itaque Excessum, Unus Itaque Idem Eadem Idem

10-01-2006, 04:44 AM	#2 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	Good to see you posting again Dean. I really like this one. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

10-01-2006, 07:29 AM	#3 (permalink)
DomesticGoddess Autistic Terror Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Florida Age: 34 Posts: 163 My Mood:	Shadows As the sun goes down they begin to gather. Abundant, dark and growing. Creeping up behind touching everything in their path and moving on. Leaving no apparent trace of their existance as the soft gloaming slips into darkest night. And with the last shards of light, they dance, pull back, and are gone.

10-01-2006, 07:46 AM	#4 (permalink)
texascwby692000 Banned BANNED Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Private Age: 32 Posts: 1,550 My Mood:	dang you all should go and get published!!!! both of these are good!!!!

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