too deep

Dutchie · 08-26-2006, 02:03 PM

My anger
it's too deep for yelling
too deep for slamming doors
so in silence I sit

My pain it's too deep for tears
there's no use for crying
It's too deep for sleepless nights
So with dry eyes I stare

My heart it's been cut too deep
There is no hope of healing
No use of fixing it
So without love I live

HarlotsBeast · 08-26-2006, 04:37 PM

Short and blunt. I like it.

Gilgar · 08-27-2006, 02:36 PM

Ditto, it's good.

08-26-2006, 02:03 PM	#1 (permalink)
Dutchie Lil Ball of Psycho Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Netherlands Age: 25 Posts: 843 My Mood:	too deep My anger it's too deep for yelling too deep for slamming doors so in silence I sit My pain it's too deep for tears there's no use for crying It's too deep for sleepless nights So with dry eyes I stare My heart it's been cut too deep There is no hope of healing No use of fixing it So without love I live __________________ I am an angel, honestly the horns are just there to keep the halo straight

08-26-2006, 04:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	Short and blunt. I like it. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

08-27-2006, 02:36 PM	#3 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	Ditto, it's good. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

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