Eh... whatever.

AE86Deacon · 08-25-2006, 11:07 AM

The smoke that trails off of the match
That lit your last cigarette
The scent of that final strike that lingers on my fingers
As I wipe the dripping tears from the tip of my nose
The faint traces of your perfume
Brings back thoughts of our first night
Sand, love, soft blankets, and the bed of my truck
And the wind that wafts your memory
Across my cold and shallow mind
And with no depth left I fade away,
My last bit of being disappears
Into the salty moon lit sky...
Like the smoke and scent, of that burned out matchstick.

Gilgar · 08-25-2006, 12:44 PM

Digging it man, got some nice imagery there.

HarlotsBeast · 08-25-2006, 01:21 PM

That was interesting to say the least. I like it.

Johnboat · 08-25-2006, 04:02 PM

Yay, fire!

AE86Deacon · 08-25-2006, 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Johnboat

Yay, fire!

Agreed.

08-25-2006, 11:07 AM	#1 (permalink)
AE86Deacon Schizoid Insominac Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: California Age: 26 Posts: 37 My Mood:	Eh... whatever. The smoke that trails off of the match That lit your last cigarette The scent of that final strike that lingers on my fingers As I wipe the dripping tears from the tip of my nose The faint traces of your perfume Brings back thoughts of our first night Sand, love, soft blankets, and the bed of my truck And the wind that wafts your memory Across my cold and shallow mind And with no depth left I fade away, My last bit of being disappears Into the salty moon lit sky... Like the smoke and scent, of that burned out matchstick. __________________ I win.

08-25-2006, 12:44 PM	#2 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	Digging it man, got some nice imagery there. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

08-25-2006, 01:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	That was interesting to say the least. I like it. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

08-25-2006, 04:02 PM	#4 (permalink)
Johnboat Mondu's Sperm Bank Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 28 Posts: 3,345 My Mood:	Yay, fire! __________________ My cult like following is now taking applications.

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