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Old 08-21-2006, 02:26 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Revolution

Here I am, alone again, in the midst of all these people.
Appearing to be just another face in the crowd.
Little do they know it’s time for the revolution.
I’m going to say what I feel, I’m going to make it loud.
Hundreds, if not thousands, within range of my speech.
None of them know what’s coming their way.
I’m prepared to make my stand, say what I need to say.
Nothing, and no one, will stand in my way.
I prepare to speak, in this all will hear me.
I check my settings, and still my breath.
I feel for the ones about to hear my thunder.
They will go down in history, right along with me.
I speak the words, say what few want to hear.
But my point is clear, the revolution is here.


This is for all who speak their minds, even if what they say is irrelevant.
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Old 08-21-2006, 11:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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woot! I like that a lot! Sounds like it would make a really good song too.
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Old 08-21-2006, 11:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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What she said.
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Old 08-22-2006, 12:44 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I got a few different images out of that one. I won't go into detail on any of them but let's just say they are all over the spectrum. Been along time since that's happened.
Good to see you back in here B.
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Old 08-22-2006, 01:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Well, I had originally intended to have a bomb detonate at the end of the poem, but it didn't quite flow. I think there's imagry apparent in here for that though.
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That was the second image I had... The first one was just someone grabbing random strangers and yelling at them with a bullhorn....
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If life were a music video...cuz that would be fun to do.
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Yes it would be.
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