A Couple of Triolet Style poems

HarlotsBeast · 08-19-2006, 08:00 PM

I like the first one alot. the second one reminds me of myself so I'm kinda chilled right now.... good shit man.

Gilgar · 08-20-2006, 12:35 AM

I'm digging Walking Away here. And I may toy with this style a bit myself. Cheers mate.

HarlotsBeast · 08-20-2006, 04:00 AM

I've read a few of D.A.'s poems and they make all the shite I've posted before seem like the works of a braindead office worker... his poetry is awesome.

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HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	I like the first one alot. the second one reminds me of myself so I'm kinda chilled right now.... good shit man. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

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Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	I'm digging Walking Away here. And I may toy with this style a bit myself. Cheers mate. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

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HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	I've read a few of D.A.'s poems and they make all the shite I've posted before seem like the works of a braindead office worker... his poetry is awesome. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

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