08-19-2006, 02:27 PM
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| Lil Ball of Psycho  Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Netherlands Age: 25
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My Mood:   | about time I posted some again A secret I know you just want pleasure and nothing serious with me you want to go out you want to be free I have accepted that I don’t cling to you You have your life And I have one too I don’t say anything when you leave But I am happy when you’re here So I won’t disturb you I will hide my fear I make love to you With my body and my heart Still I don’t cry every time we part I have respected your need to be wild and free Still I treasure the time you spent with me And one day I will tell you My own little secret cause even though you probably don’t feel the same for me Still I have to say I love you secretly ============================= My heart I would give you my heart, really I would I would give you my soul if I could But you see They got torn by a guy, who’s ring I have worn I got them back No longer in one piece So I decided to put them at ease I will never give them away again But I tell you what You can share my thoughts Of my happiness you can be a part But I am sorry to say I can not give you my heart. You see I got attached to it And all it’s pain I feel So I will keep it with me Till I find a love that’s real So if you want to be with me Let’s give it a try Let’s start, I will give you my everything just don’t ask for my heart
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08-20-2006, 12:33 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood:   | I'm liking A Secret. I think most if not all people can relate to that one.
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08-20-2006, 03:16 AM
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| Mondu's Sperm Bank  Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 28
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My Mood:  | Yummy. Excellent poems. I hope you wouldn't mind an editing suggestion. It just doesn't seem to fit. *shrugs* Remove... 'cause even though you probably don’t feel the same for me' ...from the first poem.
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08-21-2006, 11:46 AM
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| Lil Ball of Psycho Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Netherlands Age: 25
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My Mood: | thanx guy and thanx John, but then I would have to ad something else or it wouldn';t look right
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08-22-2006, 08:49 AM
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| Lil Ball of Psycho Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Netherlands Age: 25
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My Mood: | If only With tears in my eyes I hear you say you love me I wish I could say it back But it isn't meant to be I see how happy the kids are when you come through the door I wish I could feel the same But it isn't like before Somehow things have changed My feelings aren't the same My heart no longer skips a beat by the mentioning of your name And no matter how I try I can't get back on the right track I lost the loving feeling and can't seem to get it back
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08-22-2006, 11:19 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | I like that one, I don't know why.
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