A Poem Titled "Is"

Survivor · 08-19-2006, 07:13 PM

I would really like to hear some feedback on this one.

HarlotsBeast · 08-19-2006, 07:58 PM

this is the same one I read back at Southwest right?

Survivor · 08-19-2006, 10:50 PM

I didn't have this one with me there, you probably read it on the other site that I post on

Gilgar · 08-20-2006, 12:30 AM

I think wowie damn about covers it. It may be my backwoods raising but I don't think I've ever seen a style quite like this one, the way it's setup, the flow, the originality. I'm impressed, and that don't happen often.

Johnboat · 08-20-2006, 03:11 AM

I love it. Creative. I dig free-thought poetry. A nice break from the standard verse, rhyming, etc.

HarlotsBeast · 08-20-2006, 04:11 AM

D.A.,
I think I read another in the same style... close to the front of your book.

Brandon,
What's even more impressive is D.A. just started writing any form of poetry just a few months ago or a month ago, something like that... I just got back from the bar so my times are a bit off...

08-18-2006, 05:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
Survivor Psychotic Poet Laureate Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Minnesota Age: 44 Posts: 103 My Mood:	A Poem Titled "Is" I __________________ Amor Itaque Excessum, Unus Itaque Idem Eadem Idem Last edited by Survivor; 09-15-2006 at 01:43 AM.

08-19-2006, 07:13 PM	#2 (permalink)
Survivor Psychotic Poet Laureate Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Minnesota Age: 44 Posts: 103 My Mood:	I would really like to hear some feedback on this one. __________________ Amor Itaque Excessum, Unus Itaque Idem Eadem Idem

08-19-2006, 07:58 PM	#3 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	this is the same one I read back at Southwest right? __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

08-19-2006, 10:50 PM	#4 (permalink)
Survivor Psychotic Poet Laureate Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Minnesota Age: 44 Posts: 103 My Mood:	I didn't have this one with me there, you probably read it on the other site that I post on __________________ Amor Itaque Excessum, Unus Itaque Idem Eadem Idem

08-20-2006, 12:30 AM	#5 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	I think wowie damn about covers it. It may be my backwoods raising but I don't think I've ever seen a style quite like this one, the way it's setup, the flow, the originality. I'm impressed, and that don't happen often. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

08-20-2006, 03:11 AM	#6 (permalink)
Johnboat Mondu's Sperm Bank Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 28 Posts: 3,345 My Mood:	I love it. Creative. I dig free-thought poetry. A nice break from the standard verse, rhyming, etc. __________________ My cult like following is now taking applications.

08-20-2006, 04:11 AM	#7 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	D.A., I think I read another in the same style... close to the front of your book. Brandon, What's even more impressive is D.A. just started writing any form of poetry just a few months ago or a month ago, something like that... I just got back from the bar so my times are a bit off... __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

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