Cutters paradise

Gilgar · 08-18-2006, 01:36 PM

And now a duo of never before read poems. Manda, I dedicate these to you dear.

Stainless Steel Butterfly

My stainless steel butterfly.
Cut me deep, bleed me dry.
As life blood leaves me, the memories flee me.
Drop after drop, pain after pain.
The big question now, am I still sane?
Cold hard steel, pierces warm live flesh.
Pain and ecstacy mesh.
A sting, a burn, no longer do I yearn.
Embrace the darkness, I fear my own hands now.

This next one I had some fun with.

Steel over skin, again and again.
It's easier everytime.
When will it end, why did it begin.
A pain for a pleasure, what price my mind.
Sanity is slipping, I feel sublime.
The memory will fade, the scars will stay.
A long sleeve shirt, hides the flesh I have hurt.
Some cuts are explained away.
They mark it up to kitchen work.
Sometimes sharp kitty claws.
Wait a minute, pause...
Did you hear that?...
Come here kitty cat.

psychotic crotch crickets · 08-18-2006, 04:22 PM

awww they made me cry...those are REALLY good and they touched me cause i know exactly what your talking about. Thank you for dedicating them to me that means a lot

HarlotsBeast · 08-19-2006, 10:12 AM

Those are good B. I really like the feeling in the first one...

Gilgar · 08-20-2006, 12:26 AM

As did I, there's a bit of a story behind those two. Short version, yes I did cut myself, no I don't do it any longer, and, in a twisted way that only occurs in my life, the old beverly hillbillies tv show is responsible in part.

HarlotsBeast · 08-20-2006, 03:58 AM

I figured that they were more of First Person point of view becuz of the detail behind them. Whether you do still or not, isn't really the issue, as long as you can acknowledge the fact makes it easier to deal with.

and the Beverly Hillbillies????????

Gilgar · 08-20-2006, 11:19 PM

I'll take the time to write the circumstances out later. It's takes a little explaining.

HarlotsBeast · 08-22-2006, 12:46 AM

K, I'll be patiently awaiting some form of explanation...

08-18-2006, 01:36 PM	#1 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	Cutters paradise And now a duo of never before read poems. Manda, I dedicate these to you dear. Stainless Steel Butterfly My stainless steel butterfly. Cut me deep, bleed me dry. As life blood leaves me, the memories flee me. Drop after drop, pain after pain. The big question now, am I still sane? Cold hard steel, pierces warm live flesh. Pain and ecstacy mesh. A sting, a burn, no longer do I yearn. Embrace the darkness, I fear my own hands now. This next one I had some fun with. Steel over skin, again and again. It's easier everytime. When will it end, why did it begin. A pain for a pleasure, what price my mind. Sanity is slipping, I feel sublime. The memory will fade, the scars will stay. A long sleeve shirt, hides the flesh I have hurt. Some cuts are explained away. They mark it up to kitchen work. Sometimes sharp kitty claws. Wait a minute, pause... Did you hear that?... Come here kitty cat. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

08-19-2006, 10:12 AM	#3 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	Those are good B. I really like the feeling in the first one... __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

08-20-2006, 12:26 AM	#4 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	As did I, there's a bit of a story behind those two. Short version, yes I did cut myself, no I don't do it any longer, and, in a twisted way that only occurs in my life, the old beverly hillbillies tv show is responsible in part. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

08-20-2006, 03:58 AM	#5 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	I figured that they were more of First Person point of view becuz of the detail behind them. Whether you do still or not, isn't really the issue, as long as you can acknowledge the fact makes it easier to deal with. and the Beverly Hillbillies???????? __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

08-20-2006, 11:19 PM	#6 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	I'll take the time to write the circumstances out later. It's takes a little explaining. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

08-18-2006, 04:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
psychotic crotch crickets Schizoid Insominac Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Missouri Age: 20 Posts: 233 My Mood:	awww they made me cry...those are REALLY good and they touched me cause i know exactly what your talking about. Thank you for dedicating them to me that means a lot

08-22-2006, 12:46 AM	#7 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,656 My Mood:	K, I'll be patiently awaiting some form of explanation... __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

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