08-18-2006, 05:29 AM
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| Schizoid Insominac  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Missouri Age: 20
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My Mood:    | Razor Blade Kiss Razor Blade Kiss She Reaches For The Blade Again Wishing The Pain Inside Would Fade She Cuts Her Skin Once Again As She Bleeds The Pain She Felt Starts To Fade For A Few Moments her Pain Is Gone And Then She's Alive Once Again Just A few Moments Then She's Done She Hits The Floor To Face Reality Again Wishing The Pain Would Go Away To Leave Her And Never Return She's Not That Lucky At Least Not Today She Has No Where Left To Turn The Kiss Of A Blade Is All She Has Left And Thats What She'll Do When There's Nothing Left Just One Last Kiss Of A Blade Then Everything Starts To Fade She Slowly Starts To Die Yet She Feels So Alive A Pool Of Blood Is Where She Lies On The Floor No Longer Alive Her Parents Start To Cry Wondering What Happend And Why Asking God Why'd She Have To Die Her Mother Then Finds The Note And Only Cries Her Father Slowly Read What The Note Had Said Good-Bye, I Love You Is All It Said Then The Signature He Then Read It Simply Said "One Last Razor Blade Kiss." |
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08-18-2006, 10:03 AM
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| Blow Pop of Doom  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
Posts: 2,367
My Mood:  | I like this one... 
__________________ “If people bring so much courage to this world the world has to kill them to break them, so of course it kills them. The world breaks every one and afterward many are strong at the broken places. But those that will not break it kills. It kills the very good, and the very gentle, and the very brave impartially. If you are none of these you can be sure it will kill you too, but there will be no special hurry.” - Ernest Hemingway |
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08-18-2006, 01:01 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
Posts: 2,499
My Mood:  | Brings me back to my good 'ol stainless steel butterfly...
__________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2  Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced. |
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08-19-2006, 10:06 AM
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| Entirely Too Lickable  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
Posts: 2,656
My Mood:  | If you're willing to post them then by all means it's the least we can do. And if they are as good as they've been, I'll keep reading.
__________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel? |
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08-20-2006, 12:28 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | What he said, I'll read, I'll give honest feedback, and when I feel like it I'll give you some of mine to bash/praise.
__________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced. |
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08-20-2006, 03:59 AM
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| Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood: | And soon enough, I'll start adding to the threads with my own stuff... once I find something I like enough or hate enough for feedback from everyone else...
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