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Old 08-13-2006, 11:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I Loved You..

I wrote this after me and my ex tim broke up for good let me know what you think about it

I Loved You

I loved you with all i had

and you just left with out a care

now im left feeling bad

and you dont even care




i loved you, lost you, and i still want you

i miss you and i dont know why

sometimes i wounder if you ever cry

if you ever just miss me too




i know im better off with out you

but yet i still want you

i miss you all the time

and your walking through life just fine




i loved you, lost you and i still want you

i miss you and i dont know why

sometimes i wounder if you ever cry

if you ever just miss me too




You looked me striaght in the eyes

and told me nothing but lies

i never saw it but now its funny

you only cared about your money




i loved you, lost you and i still want you

i miss you and i dont know why

sometimes i wounder if you ever cry

if you ever just miss me too
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Old 08-14-2006, 03:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Yes, love bites. (Sometimes for the better , and other times not so much .)

'An ex is an ex for a reason.'

Try to keep that in mind. I try to, yet have forgotten a couple of times. Oh well.
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Old 08-14-2006, 02:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm with John on this. The ex being an ex for a reason bit...

Love this one as well... hope to read more soon.
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Old 08-14-2006, 10:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
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yeah he is an ex for a reason but sometimes i wish things were different.. thanks for the advice tho guys it means a lot
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Old 08-15-2006, 12:08 AM   #5 (permalink)
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You're welcome. I know what you mean about wishing things were different sometimes.
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Old 08-17-2006, 02:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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manda i likes it! And yes your better off w/o him!!
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“If people bring so much courage to this world the world has to kill them to break them, so of course it kills them. The world breaks every one and afterward many are strong at the broken places. But those that will not break it kills. It kills the very good, and the very gentle, and the very brave impartially. If you are none of these you can be sure it will kill you too, but there will be no special hurry.” - Ernest Hemingway
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Old 08-17-2006, 04:13 PM   #7 (permalink)
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OMG i so know what u mean. I have an ex that i still had/have feelings for even tho he was horrible for me(drinks way too much and dabbles in cocaine) But now hes engaged to someone and hes her problem now...lol Love is deffinately blind!!
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Old 08-17-2006, 11:54 PM   #8 (permalink)
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...deaf and dumb.
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Old 08-18-2006, 03:27 AM   #9 (permalink)
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...deaf and dumb.
I hope I'm reading this one right and it goes with the end of pissy's.... cuz that's true.... or maybe I'm right in another way... and this involves something else that was posted already... clear this up for me John....
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yeah...it is blind all the stuff he done i never saw it untill someone made me sit down and look at everything he did gave me a HUGE reality check
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Old 08-20-2006, 02:54 AM   #11 (permalink)
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I hope I'm reading this one right and it goes with the end of pissy's.... cuz that's true.... or maybe I'm right in another way... and this involves something else that was posted already... clear this up for me John....
OK. Uh... True.

This was a 'true or false' question right?



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yeah...it is blind all the stuff he done i never saw it untill someone made me sit down and look at everything he did gave me a HUGE reality check
Good for you.

Sometimes that doesn't even help. You'll get through telling them why the person their with is NOT all-that-and-a-bag-of-shredded-cheddar-cheese. And they respond; but she/he's wonderful. Well I sure hope someone treating you like shit is fun.
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Old 08-21-2006, 11:33 AM   #12 (permalink)
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OK. Uh... True.

This was a 'true or false' question right?





Good for you.

Sometimes that doesn't even help. You'll get through telling them why the person their with is NOT all-that-and-a-bag-of-shredded-cheddar-cheese. And they respond; but she/he's wonderful. Well I sure hope someone treating you like shit is fun.
yeah i didnt listen to a lot of people that warned me in the begining then someone i was really close to sat me down and pointed things out to me and thats what snapped me into reality and thank god or id still be dating the evil dude
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Old 08-22-2006, 12:57 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Don't thank god, thank the person that snapped you back to real life...
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Old 08-24-2006, 05:12 PM   #14 (permalink)
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manda u werent the only one that was blind to what he did...he had us all wrapped around his finger
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