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Old 08-13-2006, 11:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Let You Go

i wrote this to my ex the first time we broke up

LET YOU GO!

I loved you so i let you go

I always thought you'd know

You was the only one i always thought about

And now your the one i cant live with out


When you left

i cried.

If you asked

i'd lie.


Cause i dont want you to know

How i really feel inside

I love you that i just cant hide

But when you left i really died inside


When you left

i cried.

If you asked

I'd lie.


Baby just remember though

I loved you so i let you go!
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Old 08-14-2006, 02:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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very pretty. I like it.
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Old 08-14-2006, 10:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thank you...my friend andree is planning on changing it a little and turning it into a song...dont know when he plans on doing that though he's got a alot on his plate right now
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Old 08-15-2006, 12:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I hope he gets to it, that would make a good tune.
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Old 08-15-2006, 01:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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WOW, really good poem.........really hits home!!
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Old 08-18-2006, 04:45 AM   #6 (permalink)
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very pretty. I like it.
thank you
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Very welcome... when can we be graced with more?
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Old 08-18-2006, 04:50 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Very welcome... when can we be graced with more?
i have more poems i just dont want to flood the forum with them they are all on myspace though in my blogs
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Old 08-18-2006, 04:53 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Well once I get my new comp (this one doesn't like MySpace cuz it's a slow, old ass pile of shite) you'll have to send me the link or just flood the forum with them... that is why D set up the Poetic Justice forum. Go at it and have some fun... Guaranteed I'll be there reading and posting.

But, nonetheless, I like what I've read so far of your's.

but for now, I must get some sleep. I've had a bit too much to drink tonight and I don't want to be awake when it finally hits me. So, I bid you adieu and farewell. Goodnight.
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most of my poems are pretty sad...i cant seem to write anything happy i tried tonight and it ended up sounding like poo night
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Old 08-18-2006, 09:57 AM   #11 (permalink)
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most of my poems are pretty sad...i cant seem to write anything happy i tried tonight and it ended up sounding like poo night
yeah mine too manda...i have some not so sad ones
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Old 08-18-2006, 01:06 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Don't worry about posting too many poems, the rest of us have slacked a bit in keeping this part of the forums running. Not to mention you ain't to bad chick.
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Old 08-18-2006, 04:03 PM   #13 (permalink)
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