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Old 07-31-2006, 02:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2
 
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*mature audience only*

I wrote this in a bit of self loathing, I think I may be going truly insane.

Twisted thoughts
screaming pain
blood bought
go insane
cotton candy
popsicles
ice cream rain
tortured puppy
beat the cat
flog myself
baseball bat
leather whip
silver chain
sterling blade
fall hard
thoughts fade
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Old 08-01-2006, 07:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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that's it... no more drugs... for that man

but seriously brandon... it was an interesting read. a scattered mine focused on the violence within. boy I know that feeling
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Old 08-02-2006, 06:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Kinda reminds me of an ICP song or something... Fastpaced. Violent. Deep. Disturbed.

I like.
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Old 08-03-2006, 12:09 AM   #4 (permalink)
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It was kind of a by producy of something else I've beeen working on. I'm trying to write something but I'll come up with something that doesn't fit and it winds up being a whole other thing. It's kinda nifty.
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I used to love when that would happen. keep things rolling man and let us read the backdrafts....
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