07-13-2006, 05:58 PM
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| One Very Hot Apple  Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 29
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My Mood:   | lover's tilt i wrote this today...any feedback is appreciated- loving you is a secret, in which ive had to keep to avoid the cause of pain that leave scars deep i admire you in a way that from you ive had to hide even lying to myself, my voice ive had to sacrifice time has its way of creeping without looking back leaving me behind, for better of the lack ive gotten used to who i am around you and now im left alone, in forgotten truth your words of sweet spill on my heart of pain your dancing eyes cover my body like rain the torture of breathless emotion ive buried, is starting to emerge, with all the guilt ive carried fearful you will forever fade from my life every chance i get to breathe is filled with fight striving to erase these hindering thoughts of you one can only forget for so long and the heart ensues i need to break away but im seeking you out i hate living with this need and afflictive doubt shutting my eyes and reaching out chancing my heart to breaking ground
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07-13-2006, 10:47 PM
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| Mondu's Sperm Bank  Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Washington Age: 28
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My Mood:   | Hmm... good, very good. Looking forward to its sequel, which I assume will be titled: 'Breaking Ground' or 'Broken Ground'. 
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07-19-2006, 08:52 AM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood:  | I fell sort of like I should be walking on eggshells just reading this, maybe that's just me.
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07-19-2006, 12:11 PM
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| Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Private Age: 30
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My Mood:  | Pretty powerful stuff. But you know, if you felt that way about me all this time, you could have said so.   
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