Let's try a new one...

HarlotsBeast · 02-03-2006, 04:40 AM

If any of you are interested...

This one will be more difficult but I don't wanna hear/read any moaning or complaining that you don't feel creative or that you're just not a good writer...

This one well be kind of off the wall... to some easy.. to some hard...

Some of you from before may remember the last one I tried...

You get a list of words. You can use ONLY THOSE WORDS but you do not have to use all of them. Filler words and starter words, I.E. "the, and, but, a and if" may be used and used multiple times. BUT ONLY THOSE WORDS MAY BE USED MORE THAN ONCE.

The poem can be no less than 6 lines. No more than 13.
Your list of words is as follows (separated by ; )

roach; tear; smile; moon; twitch; pipe; freewill; notebook; wasted; young; fear; thread; thought; classic; want; knife; beer; creme; silver; possible; hustle; glass; drag; drown; collapse; devil; bucket; mundane; station; guide; strange; wish; destroy; sleep; deviate; pierce; scar; music; scream; house; private; listen; submission; distraction

There you go. At least make an attempt, no matter how lame you may think it will be or how difficult you think it is. You would be suprised.

And as always, I'll add mine once there have a been a few contributions.

Gilgar · 02-03-2006, 07:12 AM

The music is strange.
A scream is wasted.
The house is private.
No possible distraction.
Thoughts of fear.
Pierce young submission.
A silver knife.
Freewill the guide.
Destroy the devil.
A mundane hustle.
Scars and smiles.

I hope I conveyed what I was trying to with this. And as always Topher, thanks for the opportunity to stretch that particular muscle.

stina · 02-03-2006, 10:16 AM

no offense but you dont start off very nice with the whining and such, so it doesnt really give me interest in doing it.
im not trying to be a bitch, but you come off as kinda mean

Gilgar · 02-03-2006, 12:59 PM

It happens, it's a fun thing to do but sometimes people aren't real receptive of it. I encourage you to try regardless. It's fun and a good way to get a feel for the way people think.

HarlotsBeast · 02-03-2006, 04:39 PM

Hey Stina.. don't worry about offending me or seeming like a "bitch"... I wrote it up that way because more often than not the posts I get in these threads are from ppl that say how little creativity they have or how hard it is or even that they have writers block so they won't do it... I'd rather just see a dead thread instead of that.

Brandon... Thanks for the post.. It was a very interesting read. Later on tonight I'll post one myself regardless of the lack of interest.

stina · 02-04-2006, 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by InsaniacMetalHead

Hey Stina.. don't worry about offending me or seeming like a "bitch"... I wrote it up that way because more often than not the posts I get in these threads are from ppl that say how little creativity they have or how hard it is or even that they have writers block so they won't do it... I'd rather just see a dead thread instead of that.

Brandon... Thanks for the post.. It was a very interesting read. Later on tonight I'll post one myself regardless of the lack of interest.

i understand that, and you have to realize its going to happen. when i make a thread i dont want 2938493933 "awwwies" and such randomly from the same people, knowing theyre doing it just to get the post count.
yes, i post alot but thats bc i like to talk and 9 out of 10 times i have substance in my posts

i replied to your previous thread such as this saying i would try it but didnt have the time, and would have to get back to it. but youre making it out to be like youre kinda mean, and i know you arent, so it bothered me a bit.
i just think that going about it in a nice fashion may make people want to post. okay?
now lets all hug

Gilgar · 02-04-2006, 07:40 PM

I only hug in the nude on the 32nd of june.

HarlotsBeast · 02-04-2006, 09:31 PM

Yeah... sorry... haven't been feeling well the last two days so I won't be able to get my post up right now... having a difficult time breathing and concentrating. I'll attempt this tomorrow.

As for the hug... I do that only on days that are sunny, bright, warm and fuzzy...

HarlotsBeast · 02-05-2006, 03:19 PM

The bucket collapse
Devil scream and music
Listen
Private wish, deviate and sleep
The classic knife and young scar
Fear the glass, freewill submission
but want a smile, pierce and twitch
hustle, destroy, wasted
silver tear
Drag the moon
A strange distraction

jimes · 02-05-2006, 10:54 PM

peirce strange the private scar
twitch but the silver roach
knife the young wasted glass moon
the wish drown a fear collapse
classic thought thread a tear
sleep distraction a pipe
but deviate if possible a submission station
the freewill scream destroy a house
listen but the hustle if music guide
drag the beer creme notebook
mundane smile the devil want a bucket

Gilgar · 02-05-2006, 11:54 PM

Nice both of you, I have to say jimes I really liked yours.

HarlotsBeast · 02-06-2006, 01:50 AM

Jimes, awesome. In a weird way that made a whole lot of sense to me..

purple_fusion_87 · 02-06-2006, 08:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by stina

i understand that, and you have to realize its going to happen. when i make a thread i dont want 2938493933 "awwwies" and such randomly from the same people, knowing theyre doing it just to get the post count.
yes, i post alot but thats bc i like to talk and 9 out of 10 times i have substance in my posts

i replied to your previous thread such as this saying i would try it but didnt have the time, and would have to get back to it. but youre making it out to be like youre kinda mean, and i know you arent, so it bothered me a bit.
i just think that going about it in a nice fashion may make people want to post. okay?
now lets all hug

...hmmm i know my reply to this doesnt consider the thread..but i post "awwwies" not to get post counts...i usually post it because i wanna reply but have nothing to really say...okay since i got that out of the way...im gonna try to do this..hehe

purple_fusion_87 · 02-06-2006, 08:18 AM

i will post mine up later...have to think...hehe

purple_fusion_87 · 02-06-2006, 10:11 AM

A notebook, a wasted smile.
A silver wish and a scream.
Pierce the sleep.
A possible submission.
Distraction drag the thought.
Destroy a fear.
Guide the knife.
A scar, a tear.
A strange collapse and twitch.

okay i tried..hehe dont laugh

HarlotsBeast · 02-06-2006, 02:41 PM

I like it.

jimes · 02-06-2006, 04:44 PM

thamks guys and i used every word

stina · 02-07-2006, 12:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by purple_fusion_87

...hmmm i know my reply to this doesnt consider the thread..but i post "awwwies" not to get post counts...i usually post it because i wanna reply but have nothing to really say...okay since i got that out of the way...im gonna try to do this..hehe

what is the point in replying then if you have nothing to say?

TheLoneOne · 02-07-2006, 01:05 PM

I like the ones y'all posted

now... I just hope I did this right

Thoughts of the mundane
pierce the screams of wasted young
tear the want of freewill
drag the pipe and drown
guide the knife to destroy
pierce the young, silver scars
sleep in the devil’s house
collapse in the devil’s wish

Gilgar · 02-07-2006, 01:57 PM

Fusion, Brandon. Nice ones you two. And we would never laugh, unless it was a humorus poem. In wich case I would laugh and there's nothing you can do to stop me, mwahhahaa

02-03-2006, 04:40 AM	#1 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,657 My Mood:	Let's try a new one... If any of you are interested... This one will be more difficult but I don't wanna hear/read any moaning or complaining that you don't feel creative or that you're just not a good writer... This one well be kind of off the wall... to some easy.. to some hard... Some of you from before may remember the last one I tried... You get a list of words. You can use ONLY THOSE WORDS but you do not have to use all of them. Filler words and starter words, I.E. "the, and, but, a and if" may be used and used multiple times. BUT ONLY THOSE WORDS MAY BE USED MORE THAN ONCE. The poem can be no less than 6 lines. No more than 13. Your list of words is as follows (separated by ; ) roach; tear; smile; moon; twitch; pipe; freewill; notebook; wasted; young; fear; thread; thought; classic; want; knife; beer; creme; silver; possible; hustle; glass; drag; drown; collapse; devil; bucket; mundane; station; guide; strange; wish; destroy; sleep; deviate; pierce; scar; music; scream; house; private; listen; submission; distraction There you go. At least make an attempt, no matter how lame you may think it will be or how difficult you think it is. You would be suprised. And as always, I'll add mine once there have a been a few contributions. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-03-2006, 07:12 AM	#2 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	The music is strange. A scream is wasted. The house is private. No possible distraction. Thoughts of fear. Pierce young submission. A silver knife. Freewill the guide. Destroy the devil. A mundane hustle. Scars and smiles. I hope I conveyed what I was trying to with this. And as always Topher, thanks for the opportunity to stretch that particular muscle. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

02-03-2006, 12:59 PM	#4 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	It happens, it's a fun thing to do but sometimes people aren't real receptive of it. I encourage you to try regardless. It's fun and a good way to get a feel for the way people think. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

02-03-2006, 04:39 PM	#5 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,657 My Mood:	Hey Stina.. don't worry about offending me or seeming like a "bitch"... I wrote it up that way because more often than not the posts I get in these threads are from ppl that say how little creativity they have or how hard it is or even that they have writers block so they won't do it... I'd rather just see a dead thread instead of that. Brandon... Thanks for the post.. It was a very interesting read. Later on tonight I'll post one myself regardless of the lack of interest. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-04-2006, 07:40 PM	#7 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	I only hug in the nude on the 32nd of june. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

02-03-2006, 10:16 AM	#3 (permalink)
stina Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Private Age: 24 Posts: 2,440 My Mood:	no offense but you dont start off very nice with the whining and such, so it doesnt really give me interest in doing it. im not trying to be a bitch, but you come off as kinda mean

02-04-2006, 09:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,657 My Mood:	Yeah... sorry... haven't been feeling well the last two days so I won't be able to get my post up right now... having a difficult time breathing and concentrating. I'll attempt this tomorrow. As for the hug... I do that only on days that are sunny, bright, warm and fuzzy... __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-05-2006, 03:19 PM	#9 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,657 My Mood:	The bucket collapse Devil scream and music Listen Private wish, deviate and sleep The classic knife and young scar Fear the glass, freewill submission but want a smile, pierce and twitch hustle, destroy, wasted silver tear Drag the moon A strange distraction __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-05-2006, 10:54 PM	#10 (permalink)
jimes Insane Dementia Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 31 Posts: 91 My Mood:	peirce strange the private scar twitch but the silver roach knife the young wasted glass moon the wish drown a fear collapse classic thought thread a tear sleep distraction a pipe but deviate if possible a submission station the freewill scream destroy a house listen but the hustle if music guide drag the beer creme notebook mundane smile the devil want a bucket __________________ OH PORCELAIN GOD I BOW TO THEE. AS I PUKE OPON ONE KNEE. ALCOHOL POISONING IS JUST IN MY HEAD, OR WILL I DIE DRY HEAVING IN BED?

02-05-2006, 11:54 PM	#11 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	Nice both of you, I have to say jimes I really liked yours. __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

02-06-2006, 01:50 AM	#12 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,657 My Mood:	Jimes, awesome. In a weird way that made a whole lot of sense to me.. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-06-2006, 08:18 AM	#14 (permalink)
purple_fusion_87 Blow Pop of Doom Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,367 My Mood:	i will post mine up later...have to think...hehe

02-06-2006, 10:11 AM	#15 (permalink)
purple_fusion_87 Blow Pop of Doom Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,367 My Mood:	A notebook, a wasted smile. A silver wish and a scream. Pierce the sleep. A possible submission. Distraction drag the thought. Destroy a fear. Guide the knife. A scar, a tear. A strange collapse and twitch. okay i tried..hehe dont laugh

02-06-2006, 02:41 PM	#16 (permalink)
HarlotsBeast Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29 Posts: 2,657 My Mood:	I like it. __________________ Do I Look As Simple As I Feel?

02-06-2006, 04:44 PM	#17 (permalink)
jimes Insane Dementia Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 31 Posts: 91 My Mood:	thamks guys and i used every word __________________ OH PORCELAIN GOD I BOW TO THEE. AS I PUKE OPON ONE KNEE. ALCOHOL POISONING IS JUST IN MY HEAD, OR WILL I DIE DRY HEAVING IN BED?

02-07-2006, 01:05 PM	#19 (permalink)
TheLoneOne Krazed Addicted Master Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30 Posts: 2,796 My Mood:	I like the ones y'all posted now... I just hope I did this right Thoughts of the mundane pierce the screams of wasted young tear the want of freewill drag the pipe and drown guide the knife to destroy pierce the young, silver scars sleep in the devil’s house collapse in the devil’s wish __________________ Is this the part when I'm supposed to give a shit? Sorry... must've missed it.

02-07-2006, 01:57 PM	#20 (permalink)
Gilgar Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21 Posts: 2,499 My Mood:	Fusion, Brandon. Nice ones you two. And we would never laugh, unless it was a humorus poem. In wich case I would laugh and there's nothing you can do to stop me, mwahhahaa __________________ A dragon you say? I poke him in the eye with my stick of pokeing +2 Note: No trees were killed in the sending of this message, but a large number of electrons were terribly inconvenienced.

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)