09-08-2005, 10:04 PM
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| Entirely Too Lickable  Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood:   | New Word Poem Alright, this one should be easy enough. Just a few words. Use them all. Any manner of the word. Any sequence. At least 5 lines. No more than one page. Only stipulation, Be Angry. Here's the words... Twisted. Hatred. Violent. Blood. Moon. Scream. Demented. Have fun. Bring out the anger and discontent. You know how this works, show me some posts and I'll add mine.
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09-09-2005, 01:33 PM
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| Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood: | Okay... obviously I wasn't thinking when I made this one... as late as I did. so I'm gonna shamelessly bump it back up and await some entries. And then after I get a nap in I'll add mine... if I see some actual poems posted.... It's been awhile since I've done one of these ppl... show me ya care. 
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09-09-2005, 02:13 PM
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| go ninja.  Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Texas Age: 23
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My Mood:    | Twisted. Hatred. Violent. Blood. Moon. Scream. Demented. His mind is Twisted His soul angry The Blood Red Moon shines bright upon his demented deed No scream was heard his foe lay dead from a violent love that one makes my stomach hurt worse than it already does...
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09-10-2005, 03:43 PM
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| Entirely Too Lickable Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Wisconsin Age: 29
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My Mood: | Since the rest of the poetic ppl on here haven't been around other than you and myself Brit, I'll add mine now... cuz I hate to see my own threads die like this before I can add my own touch... Here goes nothing... on the spot... Twisted. Hatred. Violent. Blood. Moon. Scream. Demented. Demented thoughts of gruesome death Twisted inside my head clouded by disease Violent screams of agony and depressioin could curdle the blood of any demon Death Moon rising over a morgue quiet town as my hatred for this life deepens
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09-11-2005, 03:20 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2  Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood:  | Hatred boiling in my blood, a lust for pain, make them scream. Violent tendencies, a person not myslef. Make them hurt. A twisted feeling deep inside. Give me blood, I want your life. Demented notions in my mind. Death for you, I WANT YOUR LIFE. I have a feel for killing, it's a wild fucking ride. What brings these rages out in people, the need to kill, the want to die. Oh look, the full moon, NOW SHUT THE FUCK UP AND GIVE ME YOUR LIFE.
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09-21-2005, 02:02 AM
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My Mood:  | Blood on my hands, a tear in my eye. Hatred boiling deep inside, I'll make you cry. Violent urges twist my mind, dead inside. Full moon emerges, I welcome the pain. Twist your head, break your neck. I scream for you, I mourn you. Dementia turns my mind to mush. Silence, hush... |
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09-21-2005, 07:34 AM
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| Krazed Addicted Master  Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Private Age: 30
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My Mood:  | full blood moon rising screams in the night crimson rivers flowing free such a demented soul he is letting his hatred reign upon such a helpless victim and with an artist's grace he creates his violent masterpiece flesh tearing, bones breaking cutting, biting, hacking, clawing what once was so beautiful now, just a grotesque vision perfection of his twisted imagination slowly sucking the life's blood from his fingers he leaves his handywork smiling a devil's smile he searches for his next victim another subject to ease his twisted mind
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09-21-2005, 05:15 PM
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| Brandon 1st Blood, Part 2 Join Date: May 2005 Location: Missouri Age: 21
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My Mood: | Both very nice. I always have trouble making these things of any length unless there's more words.
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